Absolutely intrigued! I'd love to see a longer version, maybe that mixes both halves of the pages? Like, the mechanics don't (to me) feel tied into the top half of the page.
But it's all good content! I love the details and the mechanics, but the actual drive to adventuring is only mentioned a couple times. I'd love to see a longer version with a sample of play, example dungeons (or just a table of rumors for dungeon delving), some sample items with tags, etc.
I hope the critical points of this post aren't overwhelming; I definitely want the takeaway of my comment to be "I want more!"
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Absolutely intrigued! I'd love to see a longer version, maybe that mixes both halves of the pages? Like, the mechanics don't (to me) feel tied into the top half of the page.
But it's all good content! I love the details and the mechanics, but the actual drive to adventuring is only mentioned a couple times. I'd love to see a longer version with a sample of play, example dungeons (or just a table of rumors for dungeon delving), some sample items with tags, etc.
I hope the critical points of this post aren't overwhelming; I definitely want the takeaway of my comment to be "I want more!"
not overwhelming at all, thank you for reading!
I may make an extended version at some point without the 1-page restriction of the jam :) just hoping I'll find the time.